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Unit 1 Classmates(同学)作文题目:My Good Friend

写作要求:介绍一位同学的长相、性格和喜欢的事。

四步写作法

1. 定人物:用“There is... in my class. Her/His name is...”介绍

→ 例:There is a girl in my class. Her name is Lily.(对应教材P2“cute, friendly”)

2. 讲长相:用“has... hair/eyes”描述外貌

→ 例:She has short hair and big eyes. She is short and thin.

3. 说爱好:用“like + 动词ing”写喜欢做的事

→ 例:She likes drawing cats and reading storybooks.

4. 谈原因:用“because”说明喜欢的理由

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→ 例:I like her because she plays with me every day.

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My Good Friend

There is a girl in my class. Her name is Lily. She has short black hair and big eyes. She is short and wears a red skirt. Lily is very nice—she always says "hello" to everyone. She likes drawing cats and reading storybooks in class. Last week, she drew a picture for me! I like Lily because she plays games with me at lunch. We are good friends!

Unit 2 Teachers(老师)作文题目:My Teacher

写作要求:描述老师的长相、教的科目和你喜欢的原因。

四步写作法

1. 定老师:用“My teacher is... She/He teaches...”介绍

→ 例:My teacher is Miss Wu. She teaches English.(对应教材P14“slim, young”)

2. 讲长相:用“has... hair”“wear...”描述外貌

→ 例:She has long curly hair and wears glasses.

3. 说上课:用“teach... with...”说明上课方式

→ 例:She teaches English with songs and pictures.

4. 表喜欢:用“make... happy”表达感受

→ 例:She makes me happy in class.

参考范文

My Teacher

My teacher is Miss Wu. She teaches us English. She has long curly hair and wears glasses. Miss Wu is young and always smiles. She teaches English with funny songs and big pictures. Yesterday, we sang an English song about animals! She gives us stars when we answer questions. I like Miss Wu because she makes me happy in class. She is like a friend!

Unit 3 Animals(动物)作文题目:My Favourite Animal

写作要求:介绍喜欢的动物的长相、吃什么和生活的地方。

四步写作法

1. 定动物:用“My favourite animal is... It is...”点明

→ 例:My favourite animal is the panda. It is black and white.(对应教材P26“panda, cute”)

2. 讲长相:用“has... body parts”描述特征

→ 例:It has a round face and short legs.

3. 说生活:用“live in.../eat...”说明习性

→ 例:Pandas live in the forest and eat bamboo.

4. 谈原因:用“because”说明喜欢的理由

→ 例:I like pandas because they are very cute.

参考范文

My Favourite Animal

My favourite animal is the panda. It is black and white. Pandas have a round face, short legs and big black eyes. They live in the forest and eat bamboo every day. Pandas can climb trees and sleep for a long time. I saw a panda on TV last week—it was eating bamboo and looked very funny! I like pandas because they are cute and make me happy. They are my favourite!

Unit 4 Shopping Day(购物日)作文题目:Buying a Gift

写作要求:描述买礼物的经历,包括买了什么、多少钱和感受。

四步写作法

1. 定事件:用“Last... I went to... to buy...”介绍

→ 例:Last Sunday, I went to a shop to buy a gift.(对应教材P44“shop, price”)

2. 讲过程:用“first/then”连接动作

→ 例:First, I saw many toys. Then I chose a car.

3. 说价格:用“cost... yuan”说明花费

→ 例:The car cost 30 yuan.

4. 谈感受:用“be happy”表达心情

→ 例:I was happy with the gift.

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Buying a Gift

Last Sunday, it was my friend Bill’s birthday. I went to a shop near my home to buy a gift. The shop had many toys, pencils and books. First, I saw a blue model car. Then I asked the shop lady, "How much is this?" She said, "30 yuan." I gave her the money and took the car. When I gave it to Bill, he smiled and said, "Thank you!" I was happy because he liked the gift. Buying gifts is fun!

Unit 5 TV Shows(电视节目)作文题目:My Favourite TV Show

写作要求:介绍喜欢的电视节目、看的时间和喜欢的原因。

四步写作法

1. 定节目:用“I like... TV shows. They are about...”介绍

→ 例:I like animal TV shows. They are about pandas and lions.(对应教材P56“nature shows, fun”)

2. 讲内容:用“show.../let me see...”说明节目内容

→ 例:They show animals running and eating.

3. 说时间:用“watch... on + 时间”说明观看时间

→ 例:I watch them on Saturday evening.

4. 谈原因:用“because”说明喜欢的理由

→ 例:I like them because they are fun.

参考范文

My Favourite TV Show

I like watching animal TV shows. They are about pandas, lions and elephants. The shows let me see animals running, eating and playing. I watch them every Saturday evening with my family. Last week, I saw a show about baby pandas—they were so cute! I like animal TV shows because they are fun and make me laugh. I can learn many things about animals too!

Unit 6 Chores(家务)作文题目:My Chore

写作要求:介绍做的家务、怎么做的和喜欢的原因。

四步写作法

1. 定家务:用“I help... do... at home.”介绍

→ 例:I help my mum water the plants at home.(对应教材P68“chores, water plants”)

2. 讲做法:用“first/then”描述步骤

→ 例:First, I get the water. Then I pour it on the plants.

3. 说频率:用“every.../once a...”说明频率

→ 例:I do it every morning.

4. 谈感受:用“make... happy”表达心情

→ 例:It makes me happy to see the plants grow.

参考范文

My Chore

I help my mum water the plants at home. Every morning, I do this chore. First, I get a small cup and fill it with water. Then I walk to each plant and pour the water slowly. We have five plants in our home—two in the living room and three in my room. When I water them, I talk to the plants! My mum says they grow fast because I take care of them. I like this chore because it makes me happy to see the green leaves!

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